Comments and Reviews:
Bryce Lynch, tenfootpole.org
"Yeah I really wanna run that, and a lot of that is from the map alone"
Johan Nohr, MÖRK BORG artist and graphic designer (via Discord)
"Excellent work! This is better
stuff than many published dungeons. It features a compelling layout and visual
design. Just looking at this pdf invites me into a horror story with teasing
secrets.
The more I read this, the more I
love it, as an excellent opportunity for mixed violence and social engagement.
Something of a weird fever dream, the core interior concept informs suspension
of disbelief and all of the characters. Bullwain Boque for example is a
character without much prose dedicated to explaining his personality, but
because of the context he seems full of potential. I applaud your design for
canny delegation of detail.
The puzzle-like pieces of the map
which are scattered throughout the .pdf create a portrait of the internal space
which is both easy to refer to, because the pieces are right there next to
their details text, and easy to memorize, because the pieces fit together with
a clear logic which is distinct for each piece. Thus it is easy for me to
follow, page-to-page"
Peter Webb, Instadeath (via Facebook)
